Sean Demme
9.21.2012
English 1510
Writing
Constructs: punctuation
Punctuation isnt important at all its
something that people made up way back in the day to make writing more
difficult just another aspect to the writing process Isaac babel says no iron can
pierce the heart with such force as a period put just at the right place
basically he is proving how punctuation only hurts us and our writing
No.
Clearly,
after reading just that little section of puncuationlessness, one can see just
how vital our commas and our semicolons are to our writing. Believe it or not
punctuation started way back in ancient Greece and Rome when people needed to
show where to pause and slowdown in writing speeches. But it wasn’t until the
15 century that we started to put punctuation into our writing. Without it our
writing would still be the way it is at the top of this document – we’d all
sort of sound like we need some Adderall before and after school. It’s childish
sounding really.
Another
source I found showed fourteen of the punctuation marks that I had never seen
before – basically, were not known to the average college student. This brings
up two questions – why and where. Why do we have extra punctuation marks? Is
there a vital mark that we aren’t using? That could drastically change our
writing? Why is it that some just aren’t taught? Also, where is it that our
writing is headed? It could be that these punctuation marks are outdated, or
maybe that our current marks are outdated. It’s imperative that we look back on
how our grammar and punctuation have changed and will change more in the
future.
My
last source is myself. When I used to slave over the family computer back in my
high school days I would write and write and write and have my mom revise it.
And some of the things she would do would be outdated. The double space after a
period, she would do that. And throughout my writings I have developed this
outlandish love for dashes – my writing have evolved from hers and from school.
Writing will always be the same grueling process, not bad, just tedious – but
one things for sure and that’s that punctuation and grammar are ALWAYS changing
and reshaping the form of the writing we have today and in the future.

Sean,
ReplyDeleteYour intro is clever and works. You may want to reevaluate some of your sources though, about.com is not really a great use of a source. To run the risk of sounding like a broken record, Lynne Truss would be great for this essay. Dawkins in ROW would help also. I like the direction you are going in and your voice is shaping up nicely.